"Without commitment you'll never start. But more importantly, without consistency, you'll never finish." ~Denzel Washington

Social Media Paper Edits

For my global edits I spent at least 50-60 minutes editing my paper. After reading the comments from my peer editor I realized that my connections didn’t really make sense. My naysayer argument had essentially nothing to do with my main claims or argument. So, I added a few new paragraphs that made more sense with my main argument. I then re-wrote my naysayer argument paragraph to help it align better with the paper. I also tried to cut down on quote length, but to also add some new quotes to help the argument.

1 Comment

  1. jengennaco

    Hi, Megan,
    It sounds like you made a lot of global edits with a focus on clarifying your ideas and evidence. I look forward to reading your final draft!

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